Sunday Snippets 31 – Deep Fried Sweethearts

Apr 19, 2014 | Books, Holiday, WeWriWa, Writing


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DFS_MDAfter Tag caught her sleeping at her desk last week, Michaela’s usual perusal of his strong arms (she really does admire them often) leads to a discovery

(Due to length of scene, this will be continued next week):

“So what were you up to this morning? You’re filthy.” She’d returned her gaze to his arms; that’s how she’d noticed the dark smudges near his elbow and wrist, “Grease?”

“Oil-I thought I got it all.” He lifted his arm, his forehead puckering into an adorable hint of a frown. “Damn, don’t worry. I’ll get good and cleaned up before I touch food-maybe I should have you check me thoroughly.”

A task she sure wouldn’t mind for a minute.

*Tiniest bit of creative editing in place, just a wee bit to fit it into the 8

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Michaela O’Keefe is in over her head with her restaurant, The Midway.  Her ad for an assistant manager brings Owen “Tag” Montague to her doorstep. With an impeccable resume and dozens of letters of recommendation, she has little choice but to give him a chance. Ten years her junior, Tag sets her long-dead libido humming, but she gave up on love and her instincts on men years ago.

Tag has had a crush on his new boss since his youth, but he’s determined to prove he can do the job. Still, he can’t resist the urge to make her blush down to her toes as often as possible. He knows her rough past in life and love makes it hard to trust, and he’s wary of crossing the line he so desperately wants to.

Just when they manage to figure out how to work and play together, Michaela’s ex does all he can to destroy their budding love. When push comes to shove Michaela’s inability to give Tag the benefit of the doubt might destroy everything.

Learning to trust herself again is the hardest lesson Michaela will ever have to learn – and by the time she does, it may be too late for love.

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Sarah

13 Comments

  1. Cara Bristol

    She’d better check him out thoroughly. Just to be sure…

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    • Sarah Cass

      Can’t be too careful with these things after all 😉 lol. For that matter, if Michaela doesn’t want to, I think I have quite a long line to check him for her. 😉

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  2. Susan Stuckey

    lol – made me smile and I’m sure she would “check him over” thoroughly. Nicely done.

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    • Sarah Cass

      lol. Thanks Susan. I’m sure she would 😉

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  3. Frank Fisher

    She should check him thoroughly. Nice dialogue exchange.

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  4. Tina Christopher

    Lol, I like how he is gaining courage and actually makes a suggestion like that;).

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  5. Charmaine Gordon

    I’m completely charmed by your story. More next week.

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  6. Veronica Scott

    Enjoyed the subtext going on here between them, very clever and promising. A terrific snippet!

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  7. Sue Ann Bowling

    Well, if that’s car oil (as opposed to the edible kind) I sure wouldn’t want it in my food.

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  8. Millie Burns

    Ha, she’s already been checking him over ; ) That’s how she spotted the oil in the first place!

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  9. EE Giorgi

    “adorable hint of a frown” awww, that’s so cute!!! <3

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  10. Botanist

    LOL! I can’t help reading this with a meaningful pause and a raised eyebrow in between “check me” and “thoroughly” 🙂

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