Tuesday Tales – Light {Untitled – for now}

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snowI’ve joined another weekly writing challenge called Tuesday Tales. I get a prompt every week and write what comes to mind. This first part flowed so well, I’ll probably try to continue the story, using prompts along the way.

As of now, this is untitled. It’s not my usual style to write in first person, so I’m on a learning curve, but it’s how the story wanted to be written.

Please keep in mind that this story is coming in short pieces and is all first draft, so spelling and grammar issues are possible.

This weeks prompt: Light.

The high pitched whine of a delivery truck’s brakes penetrated the sanctuary of peace I’d built. Heavy footsteps plodded through the snow, a shadowy form growing larger through the intricate frosted glass.

Tension started to wind its way through each of my relaxed muscles. The calm center I’d managed to find popped like a bubble at the peal of our insanely loud doorbell.

So much for meditation.

With the kids at school and husband at work I thought maybe I could manage to find peace and quiet for five minutes. That’s what I get for making plans.

“I could try again.” Even as I said it, I knew it was just too much work.

Besides, curiosity tugged my attention toward the door.  Despite last year’s mad obsession with the home shopping channels, I’d been very good about not buying a whole lot this year. I couldn’t recall ordering anything in the past week.

Maybe Darren had ordered something.

I snorted as I rose to my feet.  Darren wouldn’t order anything online. Doesn’t trust the internet, big brother, or the space needle. I have always thought it was adorable, really. The man didn’t even own a smartphone.

Everyone owns smartphones. Even everyone in the government he’s so afraid of.

I pulled open the door and found a small box, hardly worth shipping via the big shipping company. Addressed to Carolyn Riese. Me. Return address, oddly smudged until unreadable.

My hackles raised and I glanced around the quiet neighborhood.

Nothing out of the ordinary caught my eye, but my nerves stayed on edge. Winter covered every naked branch and home, covering the world in white silence. A loud scream from a hawk made me jump out of my skin. I found it high in a tree.

Despite the risk of a neighbor seeing I let my third lid blink so I could see beyond the normal. The moment the membrane restored my inhuman sight the world around me changed. Light shimmered and echoed through each snowflake until the ground itself was as blinding as the sun.

Rays of red light streamed down from the tree, echoing sun-dogs in its effect. The red-tailed hawk had revealed itself to be a phoenix.

They were watching me.

If I ignored the package, the consequence could be great.

“It’s only been fifteen years.”

The phoenix turned its head at my complaint, fiery wings flapping before it lifted into the air and soared toward me.

I snatched the box from the porch and slammed the door before he got too close. The box settled in my lap as I sank to the floor. It couldn’t be.

There was still an option to ignore the box, but if I did they’d turn my life upside down in worse ways than I could imagine.

I couldn’t let that happen.


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7 Responses to “Tuesday Tales – Light {Untitled – for now}”

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  1. tricia says:

    I love her description of her husband and how he doesn’t trust technology and the description of the birds and snow. But…what’s in the box???? I’m dying to know!

    • Sarah says:

      🙂 Thanks Tricia. Once I started writing it that little quirk just jumped out at me.

      As far as the box…well, you’ll have to wait and see 😀 I believe it’ll be revealed next week.

  2. Iris says:

    Ohhhh …. Well, initially I thought … sounds like one of my days, then my thoughts wandered off – I like the husband as well. He sounds great. Then the “third lid blink” made me curious. So I definately wanna know what’s in that box.

    Welcome to TT!
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  3. V.L. Locey says:

    Welcome to Tuesday Tales!

    I had to chuckle at the ‘Everyone owns a smartphone.’ I don`t. Of course, we`re so rural we don`t have cell service so that`s probably why I don`t own a smartphone. As for that box….I`m more than a wee bit curious myself!
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  4. Tai says:

    WHAT IS SHE??? I’m so curious to know. Great read.

  5. Lindsay says:

    Interesting story. I’d love for you to keep going with it.

  6. Oh yes I need to know more… and what a glorious looking website…xx
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