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I’m still keeping you all intrigued with the beginning of the series [amazon_link id=”B00BEMN5SC” target=”_blank” container=”” container_class=”” ]Changing Tracks (The Dominion Falls Series book 1)[/amazon_link].
I’m diving into Cole’s POV for you. At the moment Jane has been ignoring him for a week because of a conversation she overheard. Her stubbornness wouldn’t let him explain it, and her stubbornness keeps her from speaking to him. At the moment, Cole has spotted her passing by on her way to the library and we see just how much she’s gotten under his skin:
Ever since the first time she’d submitted to his kiss, he’d wanted more. More of her. All of her.
So why hadn’t he taken it? She gave him plenty of opportunities, but he restrained himself. Settling for the incredible passion she laced into every kiss had somehow been enough. The passion that showed she could be the best woman he’d ever had, far from submissive—no, she’d fight for what she wanted.
Yes, he wanted more.
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very interesting POV and certainly builds the anticipation. Good 8.
Thanks, Chelle. Tension definitely builds between these two for a while…I make them wait for it, because that always makes it better, doesn’t it? 😀
Well that makes it perfectly clear 🙂 Definitely realistic to me. Now I’m wondering how long he’s willing to wait!
🙂 He’s definitely not willing to wait for much longer…but he might step on his own toes 😉
See/saw moment of lovers before the final moment. Hot eight with all the yearning.
Thanks Charmaine. He is definitely aching for her…and in ways she doesn’t even know…because he’s got a secret she doesn’t learn until book 2 😉
Well he’s definitely hooked and got it bad LOL. A great snippet!
LOL. Oh yeah, Veronica. He’s got it real bad. He thinks it’s all about the chase…but is it?
Well, Cole, I think it’s clear what you must do now. Go after her and get that MORE we all want you to have! lol. Fabulous excerpt, Sarah!
LOL!! I think he must do that too…question is, will he be able to? Hmmm…she has been ignoring him. 😉
Thanks Evelyn!
Gonna have to chase that down!
Good idea, Millie. Come on, Cole. I’m cheering for you. 🙂
Great snippet. Now I really want to know what Cole will do next;).
I wonder how he’s going to get her to listen to him? I wonder how he’s going to explain . . .
Great snippet!
Lovely job! I get an insight into her thoughts and a glimpse of their romantic chemistry!
found this interesting since I’m at a similar point in my WIP. stuborness is not usually a good thing…
So what will he do to get her attention I wonder? Especially intriguing considering she lost her memory of who she was. This is bound to get interesting. 🙂
He likes a strong woman. Like that a lot. Lovely 8. Well done!