Sunday Snippets 14 – Changing Tracks

Dec 7, 2013 | Books, Changing Tracks, WeWriWa, Writing


Welcome back to the Weekend Writing Warriors!

ChangingTracks_MEDI’m still keeping you all intrigued with the beginning of the series [amazon_link id=”B00BEMN5SC” target=”_blank” container=”” container_class=”” ]Changing Tracks (The Dominion Falls Series book 1)[/amazon_link]. You know, my amnesiac with the eidetic memory, Jane Doe…and the brothel-owner, anti-hero…Cole Mitchell.

Last week Cole called Jane “his woman” and caught himself off-guard…and realized that even though he didn’t want to care, he couldn’t help himself when it came to Jane. He ran to find her after the Indian raid…and now she spots him:

She lifted her head and saw him. The step she took toward him set his heart pounding. In that moment all the anger and frustration left. He just wanted to hold her in his arms and wipe away that damn tear.

She didn’t make him wait, running toward him at full speed. A wave of relief hit that she ran to him, just him. He held out his arms and braced for the impact. Throwing her good arm around his neck, the catch of a sob in her throat put a lump square in his.

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Head back on over to the Weekend Writing Warriors to read many more wonderful offerings!

Sarah

8 Comments

  1. charmaine gordon

    Beautiful scene so well written and grand like the old movies.

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  2. Teresa Cypher

    What a sweet scene! Very fluid. Made me smile. Good 8, Sarah! 🙂

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  3. Veronica Scott

    Very tender moment. I could really visualize the action from your description – terrific snippet!

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  4. Caitlin

    Powerfully emotional scene! You can really feel what they’re feeling.

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  5. Sue

    Awww – very sweet

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  6. Linda Hamonou

    These Indians are good at pushing them together.

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