Sunday Snippets 15 – Changing Tracks

Dec 14, 2013 | Books, Changing Tracks, WeWriWa, Writing


Welcome back to the Weekend Writing Warriors!

ChangingTracks_MEDI’m still keeping you all intrigued with the beginning of the series [amazon_link id=”B00BEMN5SC” target=”_blank” container=”” container_class=”” ]Changing Tracks (The Dominion Falls Series book 1)[/amazon_link]. You know, my amnesiac with the eidetic memory, Jane Doe…and the brothel-owner, anti-hero…Cole Mitchell.

Jumping WAY ahead (I can’t give away the farm here, people)…

Back to Jane’s POV…once again she and Cole have had a spat. Her usual tactic when the two of them argue is to ignore him. Refusing his immense libido tends to clear his head…unfortunately this time he’s been just as stubborn as she and they haven’t spoke for three weeks. The night before this scene Jane did something nice for an old friend of Cole’s, one that is usually picked on in the town, and she did it out of total kindness. It swayed Cole, and softened his anger…and here he is as she’s trying to go home:

“Jane.”

Smooth as silk, Cole’s voice wrapped around her and stopped her dead. One word sent shivers through her body. Damn it. She wanted nothing more than to give in right then, but it wouldn’t do. All it would take was an apology. Could she wait for it?

“You’re a damn annoying woman, ya know that?”

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Sarah

7 Comments

  1. Jess Schira

    Love the way she responded. Great job!

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  2. Kate Warren

    LOL! Not the apology she was looking for there! Love it!

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  3. Lauren Smith

    Love the last line! Great chemistry through the whole snippet!

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  4. Veronica Scott

    I had to laugh, not exactly an apology but at least it’s a start. Maybe? Great snippet!

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  5. Sue

    I think that’s about the best she’s gonna get out of him lol

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