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I’m still keeping you all intrigued with the beginning of the series [amazon_link id=”B00BEMN5SC” target=”_blank” container=”” container_class=”” ]Changing Tracks (The Dominion Falls Series book 1)[/amazon_link]. You know, my amnesiac with the eidetic memory, Jane Doe…and the brothel-owner, anti-hero…Cole Mitchell.
Back to Cole’s POV. He and Jane have FINALLY managed to get themselves in bed…and thanks to their long wait it was a marathon session…and I mean a marathon. These two spent almost 24 hours in bed…very little of it sleeping. After they disappeared for so long, someone comes to check on them:
When another knock sounded, she groaned, “Oh for goodness’ sake.”
Cole quirked a brow when she pulled away, propping himself up on his elbow; admiring her form as she headed toward the door, he couldn’t help but chuckle. She’d failed to put on a robe. “Uh, Jane?”
She cast a glance over her shoulder with a wicked smirk and a wink, “Yes?”
Laughing out loud at her brazen move, he couldn’t deny he admired her more for it. That sort of gumption took a certain kind of woman-his kind of woman.
*Please forgive creative punctuation…I just had to include all these lines 😉
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I find the premise compelling and your snippet made me giggle. This promises to be a fun read. (wanders off to Amazon for further investigation)
Thanks, Jess!! I have to admit I enjoy my premise almost as much as my characters!! 😀 Have fun at Amazon 😉 I’ll be having a giveaway in a few weeks here. 🙂
Haha, this was a funny moment, the poor guy at the door. 🙂
LOL. Thanks Linda!! I hope you’re still enjoying reading it!!
They do seem made for each other, really enjoyed today’s snippet. I like her! (And him too but she’s the one answering the door in the all together…)
LOL. They really do, Veronica. They fight it a lot…but they are definitely made for each other. And yes…Jane is one hell of a woman.
A very light hearted moment. I think Cole just had a moment of clarity, too.
Smiles
Steph
LOL. Yes, Cole certainly did…and he’s liking what he sees for sure. ~giggle~
Ah, whoever is at the door is possibly in for a shock : )
Lots of humor in this eight. Thanks for the light moment before the what happens next.
Ha! What fun. I like these characters. They’re realistic but not at all boring. Thanks for sharing this bit with us.
A fun and revealing snippet! ;o)
I love a woman who’s confident enough to strut herself in the buff. 😀 Fun and flirty excerpt, Sarah! Well done! 🙂
I love a woman who’s confident enough to strut her stuff in the buff. 😀 Fun and flirty excerpt, Sarah! Well done! 🙂
Love her brazenness.
Have to admire confidence like that! I bet there’s never a boring moment with these two.
curious to see the reaction of the person at the door
They sure spent all that energy they had pent up – really admire her sense of self. Fun snippet.
The snippet made me chuckle. Someones in for a surprise.
I like!
She is ballsy! Love it. Definitely want to know what happens next.