Sunday Snippets 26 – Deep-Fried Sweethearts

Mar 15, 2014 | Books, Holiday, WeWriWa, Writing


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This week we switch to Tag’s point of view. After all, we already know Michaela is lusting after the former jail-bait-turned-21 year old. What does he think about Michaela?  

Here he is with his aunt Myrtle, who runs The Diner. He’s just told her he turned in his application at The Midway. Myrtle speaks first:

“What did Mikey have to say?”

“Ugh. I hate that nickname.” He wrinkled his nose and sat at the counter. “She looks nothing like someone named Mikey. She’s sure not a tomboy; she’s all elegant and womanly.”

“That so?” Her brow arched and her lips twitched. “Are you crushing on an older woman?”

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Michaela O’Keefe is in over her head with her restaurant, The Midway.  Her ad for an assistant manager brings Owen “Tag” Montague to her doorstep. With an impeccable resume and dozens of letters of recommendation, she has little choice but to give him a chance. Ten years her junior, Tag sets her long-dead libido humming, but she gave up on love and her instincts on men years ago.

Tag has had a crush on his new boss since his youth, but he’s determined to prove he can do the job. Still, he can’t resist the urge to make her blush down to her toes as often as possible. He knows her rough past in life and love makes it hard to trust, and he’s wary of crossing the line he so desperately wants to.

Just when they manage to figure out how to work and play together, Michaela’s ex does all he can to destroy their budding love. When push comes to shove Michaela’s inability to give Tag the benefit of the doubt might destroy everything.

Learning to trust herself again is the hardest lesson Michaela will ever have to learn – and by the time she does, it may be too late for love.

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Sarah

12 Comments

  1. Karen Michelle Nutt

    Loved the snippet. Read the blurb, too. I’m intrigued. Love the book cover, too. 🙂

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  2. A.S. Fenichel

    Love older woman, younger man and this one sounds great. Love the way he describes Mikey. Nice job!

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  3. Evelyn Jules

    All elegant and womanly, eh? Sounds like somebody is smitten. 😀 Love the premise, Sarah! Great 8!

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  4. Teresa Cypher

    Wonderful visual, Sadie. I could see the brow arching. “Are you crushing on an older woman?” The snippet felt very natural; your writing is wonderfully fluid. 🙂

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  5. Veronica Scott

    Loved the snippet. The premise of this story is so engaging!

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  6. Sue Ann Bowling

    So restaurants are in his family? Loved the aunt’s quick pickup.

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  7. Dianne Hartsock

    Tag is a very interesting character! Can’t wait to see what happens next. 🙂

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  8. Gem Sivad

    Even as he speaks of her, there is a spark, an indication that he wants/there will be more between them. Great 8.

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  9. Caitlin

    Hey, a ‘Mikey’ can be womanly… Nicknames are just nicknames. I bet he likes the sound of her full name, though. Probably says it to himself, dwelling on each syllable. Which is either cute or creepy.

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  10. Millie Burns

    Oh yeah, he’s crushing…too cute.

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