Sunday Snippets 51 – Masked Hearts

Oct 4, 2014 | Books, Masked Hearts, WeWriWa, Writing


Welcome back to the Weekend Writing Warriors!

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I’m back with my travelling wild west show story, Masked Hearts.

I’m jumping ahead a ways because I will be moving on from Masked Hearts soon. Roy and Minnie have grown closer, and Minnie has even allowed herself to get to know the Cheyenne. The more she lets go of her past, the more it returns to haunt her.

Knowing what Rawlins has in store for her, she has asked Roy for one kindness before she’s sold to a whorehouse. Before Roy lets himself sleep with her, he has a confession to make about his unintentional (and forced) role in her, and his own, past. Minnie is shocked at first, but then:

“I don’t hate you. I have tried to blame you, but I cannot. You were no more an adult than I was. You can’t help what they did to you.”

“But you were right. I am why your family…”

She pressed her fingers to his lips, “The Army is why my family is gone. You didn’t kill my father, my brothers, or rape my mother.”

 

*Tiny bit of creative editing was used to get the 8

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If you want more of these wonderfully damaged pair…pick up a copy!

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Minnie Woodward lives a lie. After barely surviving the Bear River Massacre she’s lived in the white world of her guardian Mister Rawlins, her life debt keeping her tied there. The last thing she needs is Roy’s attempts to gain her favor. Her fate’s sealed. She’s never believed in hope, and not even Roy can make her start.

Roy Ornum saves Minnie every night in the traveling Wild West show. The job he took to break his gambling habit brought him a new addiction – her. He knows she doesn’t want to be rescued, but maybe he does. She’s the key to a past he lost, one he wants to find again.

As the two grow closer old wounds are reopened and their burgeoning trust is shattered. When lives hang in the balance of their choices they’ll need to work together. Otherwise everything will be lost before hope can be found.

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Head back on over to the Weekend Writing Warriors to read many more wonderful offerings!

Sarah

7 Comments

  1. Gem Sivad

    Awful truths to face, but her forgiving nature is very clear here. Great snippet!

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  2. Tina Christopher

    Wow! I’m glad they’ve grown closer and I think I know what she asked him for, but why is she allowing herself to be sold to the whorehouse?! Why isn’t she running?
    Aside from that I love how she forgives him and hopefully gives him some peace.

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  3. Christina Ochs

    That is some powerful dialogue. Nice snippet!

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  4. Veronica Scott

    This whole story is so powerful and poignant. Another excellent excerpt!

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  5. Elsa Holland

    Wow that took me by surprise. very powerful. Nice !!

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  6. Charmaine Gordon

    Outstanding and heartbreaking. Exceptional writing.

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