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I’m still keeping you all intrigued with the beginning of the series [amazon_link id=”B00BEMN5SC” target=”_blank” container=”” container_class=”” ]Changing Tracks (The Dominion Falls Series book 1)[/amazon_link]. You know, my amnesiac with the eidetic memory, Jane Doe…and the brothel-owner, anti-hero…Cole Mitchell.
Skipping ahead again. Jane/Clara was not the person killed last week…but I’m afraid I can’t tell you who. Jane has actually managed to rescue the boys and ended up under the dubious protection of Clara’s husband (Jane’s soon-to-be-ex-husband), David…who has to re-set Jane’s broken ankle thanks to her rescue attempts:
The hum of David’s voice lacked solid form. Whatever he said swam through her head without making sense. She caved to the pain moments later, slipping into welcome black. Another sharp spike of pain brought her back.
Colors danced before her eyes when she blinked them open and a quiet groan escaped. “That hurts.”
“Really? I thought it tickled.”
*For once, no creative punctuation was used. Can’t guarantee as much for future installments 😉
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Oh my, that sounds painful, I like the touch of humor.
Come on David! It’s not a good time to be funny.
She’s certainly having to deal with a great many challenges in this story but I admire how she perseveres. Terrific snippet.
Ouch! What a fabulous last line. 🙂
Lol, love the sarcasm at the end. Great description.
And the plot (and mystery) thickens! Good snippet! That last line mad me want to give him a slap!
Hmm, I guess he might be a little unkind, if she’s leaving him…he is her ex after all, and he’s tending her wounds.
Very intense scene. When you’re in a lot of pain, blacking out can indeed be a welcome sensation.
Great descriptions. Sound painful. And great last line!