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This is the last week I’ll be posting excerpts from Changing Tracks! I’m at the end of the story and this is the last I can do without revealing the end…and I’d love to leave you hooked 🙂
So hopefully I’ll leave you all intrigued with the beginning of the series [amazon_link id=”B00BEMN5SC” target=”_blank” container=”” container_class=”” ]Changing Tracks (The Dominion Falls Series book 1)[/amazon_link]. You know, my amnesiac with the eidetic memory, Jane Doe…and the brothel-owner, anti-hero…Cole Mitchell.
This snippet is actually just before the one I posted last week. Mike is about to reveal the wanted poster to Jane…and yes, for those that guessed, it did have a likeness similar to Jane on it:
“Syrus says ‘the remedy for wrongs is to forget them’. Well, I’ve forgotten them – too bad no one else has.”
Michael chuckled, “Yes, the forgetting is supposed to be done by those that were wronged. Not the other way around.”
She wiped at an errant tear and focused on the passing scenery. “I’m not getting out of this, am I?”
“Probably not with your neck the length it is now.”
The corner of her lip twitched, “What a pleasant way to put it.”
*Creative punctuation was used. Wish it wasn’t, but there it is.
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This interaction between these two characters is so clever. You should be very proud of it. I’m looking forward to reading the Changing Tracks in it’s entirety. Also, I love your cover.
Marvelous dialogue with a huge dose of irony. Thanks.
Like the dialogue back-and-forth with these characters. This was definitely an intriguing snippet.
Nice scene between these two. I’m curious by Mike’s last remark to Jane – what did he mean by that?
Really enjoyed this snippet, quite curious how she’ll get out of her various predicaments. Best wishes with this story!
Will need to add this series to my TBR list!
Sounds as if she may have done something pretty bad that she doesn’t remember–or at least everyone thinks so.
Nicely done! And you definitely left me curious.
Why do I get the feeling they are either going to hang out together or hang separately. Intrigued.