Another Hump Day Hook!
Today I’m posting a little bit from my holiday story. Santa, Maybe was written for a submission call, but I ended up falling in love with Alan and Ivy. I even fell in love with the town they were to the point that I’ve decided to turn it into a series, with about 5 more planned at this point, all set around a holiday in this little town.
After many years without seeing each other, Alan and Ivy are going on a date:
One eyebrow quirked and she teased him with another smile. “It’s nothing you haven’t seen before.”
“Those are new.” He purposely looked back at her chest. “Motherhood did you good in many ways, Ivy.”
“Pig.”
“Oink.”
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Too cute. Great hook and good luck with the series!
A very playful and cute scene. You really get a sense of their connection just by the flirty dialogue.
Oh, I do like these two. Nice scene! Congrats on the series.
I can feel the fun between these two, and in a few words you’ve brought about a smile to this reader. Loved your hook, Sarah!
if two people can flirt well then all’s good with the world 😀
What a fun little snippet!