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I’m still keeping you all intrigued with the beginning of the series [amazon_link id=”B00BEMN5SC” target=”_blank” container=”” container_class=”” ]Changing Tracks (The Dominion Falls Series book 1)[/amazon_link].
We come upon Jane, my amnesiac with the eidetic memory, and Cole…who is feeling a little jealous thanks to rumors the town is spreading around about her visits to the army camp and a certain Major Webb:
“Are you still jealous?”
“You bedded him yet?”
“No.” Hands on her hips, she lifted her chin in defiance, “I haven’t even been to bed with you and you are in my room at all sorts of inappropriate hours.”
“And you’re at the army camp at inappropriate hours too.”
“So you are jealous, good to know.”
He narrowed his eyes, his fists clenching tight until the muscles of his arms showed through his tight sleeves; a harrumph redirected her attention back to his frowning lips, “Wonder if you’ve always been this difficult.”
“Long as I can remember.”
*Creative editing employed to make this fit the 8…but I had to include that last line.
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She’s funny. Yup, long as I can remember : )
lol. Thanks, Millie. I think she’s hilarious, too. 😀
Nice! Love the dialogue that reveals so much. Well done, Sarah!
Thank you, J.A.!! I love writing dialogue and I’m glad you enjoyed reading it! 😀
Enjoyed the memory line, thanks for including that! Interesting excerpt…
Thanks Veronica. I really enjoy these characters so much, and I love sharing them with all of you!!
I love when she says as long as I can remember. LOL. he’s got his hands full
lol. Yes, he certainly does, Michelle…and he loves every minute of it, too. 😉
I had to chuckle at her wit. “Long as I can remember.” Enjoyed the snippet.
Hehe, Thanks Karen! Jane is a clever one…I frequently comment on how I wish I had her quick wit. 😀
Like how she’s distracted by his muscles in the middle of an argument. You can feel the tension between them.
Really good sparring, fun snippet.
Oh, how I love a jealous man. Incredibly sexy.
She is definitely going to get what she wants if she continues like this, no matter what that is.
Love her personality! When the bedding does happen…it’s gonna be hawt, I can tell! 😀