Hump Day Hook 50 – Dark Territory

Oct 29, 2013 | Books, Changing Tracks, Dark Territory, Secret Cravings Publishing, Writing

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Another week of [amazon_link id=”B00FE1AVOU” target=”_blank” container=”” container_class=”” ]Dark Territory[/amazon_link].  I’m not ready to give her up just yet. But, this will be the last week for a little bit.  My Christmas story will be out in just over a month, so I’ll be introducing you to Ivy and Alan in preparation for its release!

This week we’re supposed to do something spooky…which wasn’t my plan for the last week of visiting Dominion Falls for a while…but…then again, it’s pretty good.  This is told from the POV of my villain…as he’s seeing Jane – or is it Constance? Is all of this really happening?

Any thoughts of keeping silent fled as her temper flared. “You’ve killed and hurt innocent people for your revenge. You’re deranged.”

She disappeared into the shadows, reappearing a moment later. No. It couldn’t be. How is it she looked like Constance? Constance was gone. What did she do?

“Constance.” A burning pain ripped through his stomach a moment before he heard the small pop of a gun.

“You will not die easily, Alan, but you will die for the pain you caused me. You wanted me to love you. You wanted me to join you.”

“Constance. You did.” It wasn’t Constance. It couldn’t be.

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7 Comments

  1. Lyncee

    Awesome hook 😀 Thanks for sharing

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  2. Sue

    I like it – Was Constance an old lover?

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  3. Kerrianne Coombes

    Ooooh! Hooked!

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  4. Dianne Hartsock

    Very curious hook! Now I want to know what’s going on. 🙂

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  5. Linda Hamonou

    So Jane is getting a revenge, interesting, I can’t wait to read the rest.

    Reply

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