I want him.
I love him.
How dare he!
I miss him.
I love him.
Yes I will!
I do forever.
No time alone –
Kids, home, life.
I miss him.
I’m joining him.
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I have been planning on joining the Trifecta Writing Challenge for a few weeks, but it just hasn’t happened. I’ve been busy in real life and to be honest I haven’t been writing much. So today as I saw the “Trifextra” challenge (they just upgraded to 2 challenges/wk. A long one on Monday and a quick one on Friday) I was struck with the creative bug. The challenge was simple and difficult “Write a love story in 33 words.”
And so I did. Hopefully You enjoy it.
Wow! This one’s great. A whole life in 33 words.
Welcome (finally) to the challenge. Glad you joined us. Well said – indeed a life in just 33 well crafted words. 🙂
That last line “I’m joining him” wo-rries me!! But then, I’m a natural cynic.
I did enjoy it!
Me too 🙂 X
Great job. I definitely saw the development of love 🙂
Snippets of a train of thought, impulses. Feel real. But I worry: what do you mean, joining him? I need to know.
Came from the Trifextra link.
You are right, it was simple AND difficult! I love what you did with it, so many teeny tiny thoughts and so many twists and turns … glad you came out to play!
The cycle of a relationship but what about the end? Joining him where? Hopefully on a date! Enjoyed this.
I like the almost frantic back and forth feel here, so much like how trying to have ‘alone time’ with young kids around can be.
I love this! I enjoyed how you crafted a whole life into just 33 words. Wonderful! I came over from Trifecta!
Beautiful job summing up a lifetime of emotions in so few words.
Welcome to Trifecta! This is a great response to the prompt. I love that you manage to squeeze so much into 33 words. We hope you’ll come back and join us for the weekday challenge starting on Monday.