Hump Day Hook – Week 8 {Into A Mirror Darkly}

Jan 1, 2013 | Books, Hump Day Hook, Morgana Chronicles, Writing

mirrorcovermedTime for another Hump Day hook!  I worked up a mock-up cover for Mirror Darkly this past week.  I do have such fun with these.  So, since I’d played with the cover, I thought I’d use it for HDH.

Of course, it helps that I started my 500K Challenge and so have been working on this one again!

And now, without further ado, an exchange between Rose Red, the bounty hunter & Wulfric, the great hunter:

“I’m sorry.  Did you say you called Queen Melisandra, the vilest of Morgana’s queens, Mellie?”

“Should have seen her. I thought she was going to breath fire.” Green eyes twinkled to match his laughter as he tugged her stiff body closer to him.  “Solange heard about it and came to get me out. That’s why I owe her.”

“Solange had to get you out?”

“Apparently I’m not charming.”

“And you’re no prince.” Red’s lips twitched in her efforts to hide the laughter bursting up from her belly.  In a last ditch attempt she snatched the lower lip between her teeth and tried to keep her glare in check.

 

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Sarah

9 Comments

  1. Ciaran Dwynvil

    A nice hook. I really like reading about Wulfric. He sounds fun.

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  2. Michelle Hoefle

    Sounds like a fun book, it was a fun scene. Great hook. 🙂

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  3. Catherine Green

    Great hook, it was both amusing and intriguing! Thanks for sharing.

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  4. Lacie Nation

    Great hook!

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  5. Kerrianne Coombes

    Some nice dialogue here. Very intriguing x

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  6. Kathleen Grieve

    Love your cover! Makes me want to buy the book already! Glad you’re working on this for the 500k Challenge, means we will have more hooks! Loved it!

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  7. Jennifer Simpkins

    Loved your hook, Sarah. And good luck with your challenge.

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