Another Hump Day Hook!
Next week I’m having the BIG HUGE cover reveal for book 2 in my Dominion Falls Series, Derailed. So, for a nice lead in this week, I’m going back to my beloved Changing Tracks (Which received 2 new 5* reviews this week on Amazon!!)
Jane and Cole are having the first of many verbal sparring sessions:
“Well, you are a woman.” He eyed her appreciatively. “And women should keep their mouths shut. They don’t get opinions.”
“Just because you own the women you bother to keep company with and they must do as you say doesn’t mean they lack opinions. Just means you lack the fortitude to listen to them.”
“If you’re trying to curry favor, you ain’t on the right path.”
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LOL Way to go, Jane! I wonder what this argument will lead to. 🙂
Great hook, well done!
Congratulations, Cole. You just roused my feminist bone…up until now, I wasn’t even aware I had one! lol
LOL. At ease, soldier. Cole is only teasing here…he actually loves that she has a mind of her own and isn’t afraid to use it. He just likes getting her riled up 😉
Cole is going to have to work extra hard now to get back on my inner Hero List.
LOL. Would it help if you knew he was just trying to rile her and get her all excited? He’s teasing her. 😉
I want to see how she reacts to that last line.
Great hook!
You tell him, Jane!