Another Hump Day Hook!
Tricksy, though I would reveal my cover this early? Not a chance. It will come soon, though. I’m in the midst of revisions of Dark Territory and Derailed doesn’t come out until next week…so you get a little bit of 3. Just a little bit.
Cole is missing Jane a lot (can’t tell you why, or I’ll ruin books 2 & 3 lol):
Being apart from Jane got worse each minute.
Not just because he ached for her.
Not just because every thought was of her.
No.
Because she was a part of him. Deep inside to his very soul. He was consumed by her, he always had been. In a way no other woman had managed to consume him before.
If he still believed in it himself he’d call it love.
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Simple, but powerful. Nice hook!
Thank you, Alexandra. I’m glad you find it powerful, I thought it was too. 🙂
Such a powerful hook in such a brief snippet, I like it!
Thanks so much Catherine. 😀 Cole is an intense man…so his emotions get intense, too. Even when he’d rather they didn’t 😉
Well done. I love the intensity of his emotions.
Why doesn’t he believe in love anymore? Great hook!
Aww that was a very short/sweet/sad hook I loved it! I want more … why doesn’t he believe in love?
Deep emotions. Sounds like he’s a little bit more than just in love with her, bordering on obsessed 😉 Can’t wait to see how he’ll deal with these strong emotions.
A powerful hook there.
Great snippet, well done!
Oh wow! Great hook, and I want to know why he doesn’t believe in love too!