Hump Day Hook 34 – Leap

Jul 2, 2013 | Books, Hump Day Hook, Writing

violinAnother Hump Day Hook!

Even though Derailed’s release date is tomorrow (or I thought it was when I scheduled this post…now, it looks like this is not true), I’m not showing you anything from that. As of the time of me scheduling this I don’t have any buy links and I plan to do a giveaway for y’all with it next week.

In its place…this week I’m showing you a tiny little hook from my latest piece. It’s going to be a short (possibly erotic) story of the paranormal variety.  I’m hoping to keep it under 10k.

So without further ado, please meet Jayde & Magnar:

A slow smile curved her lips and his pants grew tighter. Damn, she would be the death of him, as he was assigned to be for her. Her aqua eyes scanned him from top to bottom, and she tilted her head. “How long ago did you die?”

“I don’t remember.”

“I’m guessing twenty, maybe thirty years.” She took another step closer. “Do you remember what you did in life?”

“Of course not.” No Keeper ever remembered their life.

 

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7 Comments

  1. Jessica Subject

    Oh, wow, I have so many questions. Great hook! And all the best with your release tomorrow! 🙂

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  2. Cathy Brockman

    oh oh oh!! I love this I can wait sounds intriguing!!

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  3. Lucy Felthouse

    Great hook. And happy release day for tomorrow!

    Reply
  4. Thea

    Oooh, so much good stuff going on in such a short space!

    Reply

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