Another Hump Day Hook!
I’m diving back into The Tribe this week. I’ve started edits on Dark Territory, but in between I’m still working on The Tribe. The more I work on it again, the more I remember how much I love it.
Not going to give you much background on this one…just leaving it as is:
“No.” She whispered. “I’m trying to find you.”
A sniff at her neck was the only warning before he bit down hard.
Velli fought against the urge to cry out in pain.
You will destroy them. Selfish. He bit harder and flung her against a wall before he turned and raced away.
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awesome hook
That one got my heart rate up! Nice hook.
Thrilling hook!
Very descriptive hook!
This is just plain mean…. but a great hook