Hump Day Hook 38 – The Tribe

Aug 7, 2013 | Books, Hump Day Hook, The Tribe, Writing

KaneAnother Hump Day Hook!

I’m diving back into The Tribe this week.  I’ve started edits on Dark Territory, but in between I’m still working on The Tribe. The more I work on it again, the more I remember how much I love it.

This time I’m presenting you with Reed, my heroines husband (arranged marriage, they’re best friends) and the hero – Kane.  Neither of the men can find Velli, despite numerous means of searching. They both know something is very wrong…oh, and they don’t get along so well:

“Whatever you are doing isn’t working. So how can you be sure? There’s something seriously wrong. Don’t you get that?”

Kane shoved aside the lingering aches and flew to his feet.  With a roar, he grabbed Reed by the throat and slammed him against the nearest tree. “Don’t you think we know when there’s something wrong with our mates?”

“She almost died.” The words were choked, but Reed managed to say them clear and calm.

“I know, you stupid deer.”

 

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2 Comments

  1. Jessica Subject

    Oh, they definitely don’t get along. A great hook! 🙂

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  2. Alisha Robinson

    Yes I would say they don’t get along much! Interesting snippet 🙂

    Reply

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