Another Hump Day Hook!
Back to Dark Territory! Last week I spooked you all, this week I got a little more light-hearted fare
Cole has just discovered a news article with a blatant lie about himself. His business partner, Graham, thinks it’s the most hilarious thing ever:
“That little son of a bi—”
“Ha.” Graham slapped the floor before hopping back on his feet. “You’re the one that wanted an alternate story. That’s what you get for leaving it up to Rusty. You know he’s still mad at you.”
“I didn’t do nothing to him.”
“You sent him a whore at church.”
“Well, he said I watered down my whiskey.”
“You do.” Graham snickered.
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This sounds fun!
Total man preoccupations.
The last sentence made me laugh.
LMAO Great dialogue, Sarah!
Lol, these guys sound like they have a great time tormenting each other 😛 Great Hook!!
Cute hook !
Made me smile 😉 Always a good thing
Fun banter there.
Very cute scene. Nice hook, well done.
Fun stuff. Great hook, well done!
Only good friends can talk to each other like that. 🙂